译林版英语九年级下册 Unit1 Asia 单元测试（1）

下几方面进行叙述:一、游泳安全;二、交友安全;三、应对危险措施;四、食品安全;五、防止踩踏.可\r以看出自我保护有很多方面,所以叙述时可加一些关联词,使文章看起来有逻辑性,如:first;second;also;\rbesides等等.最后还要注意总结性的语言.\r【解答】Onepossibleversion\rHowCanWeProtectOurselves\rSelf-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskillsforteenagers.Buthowcanweprotectourselves?Hereare\rsomesuggestions.\rFirst,weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends,especiallyonline.Second,ifweareindanger,wemustcall\rthepoliceforhelpintimesothatwecankeepourselvessafe.Also,weshouldeathealthilyandsafely.Besides,we\rshouldn'tcrowdeachotherwhenwegoupstairsordownstairsatschool.Last,summeriscoming,wemustremember\rit'sdangeroustoswimalone.\rInshort,everyoneneedstolearnhowtoprotectourselvesandstayawayfromdanger.\r【点评】在"谋篇"写作的过程中同学们注意:我们写出的句子,段落段子都要围绕主题展开,所描述的细节,\r事例和发表观点,情感态度等都要为主题服务.连贯性,要求所写文章有逻辑,有条理,不要让人读过之\r后感到只是若干句子的机械拼凑.\r15